Firehouse Angel Update No. 10,476 :~)

First off, Dianne, I *love* your subject line! :)

Did you decide against having a larger picture of the framed angel?

The last sentence of the paragraph for Sept 4 reads: "Before Captain Parks ended the conversation, he added that he expected the Angel to watch over them, now." I believe the comma before "now" needs to be removed (and Darla, please correct me if I'm wrong!).

Maybe bold the dates on Sept.4 & 12, since the rest are bolded?

Along those lines, to keep things in the same format, maybe Presentation and the date should be flip-flopped, with the date bolded like the rest. (I know, I'm anal about these types of things! :) )

Also, there's no attribution for the quote for Sept. 12. If it's quoted, there should be a statement as to who said it.

Well, those are my suggestions for now.....

Joan

Yeah. I thought that subject line might elicit some smiles. I think I might have low balled the figure!

I'm stuck on whether or not to have a larger picture because Marilyn is concerned about copyright and the ability to make charts from finished examples. She has indicated in the past that she's not happy with people who show their finished work in large size on their albums, web sites, whatever. Karen C. seems to have a good rapport with her and perhaps might ask the question of Marilyn.

The rest of your post I printed off and will look into it this afternoon and make the necessary changes. Thanks for taking the time to look.

Dianne

Is that what's called, "comma happy?"

Dianne

Two possibilities that have been used by designers concerned about this...

(1) a large, but very blurry, picture

(2) a copyright notice that goes right through the design. E.g., I'll put it through the top of a Silver Lining flower, so that if anyone tries to hijack it, it will be obvious that the petals truncate oddly.

Must be. And remove the one after "called" while you're removing the one before "now."