Ok guys & gals, now that I have the journaling figured out for this ministry memory album, I need your input on the title page. I've uploaded it to my photo website below. It's the only page under Ministry Memory Album. Could you please take a look at it and give me input? I want this scrapbook to be perfect. :-) The printed vellum is a sky-type scene with the sun shining through the clouds, blue sky at the top, and rose pinks and purples between the blue sky and the bottom of the page. I didn't show the full 12 x 12 page in the picture, because I just couldn't get it to scan in. (My brain's not awake enough yet to stitch..sorry.) Basically, what you see in the pic is the page. There's just the title.
Since the vellum didn't adhere real well, I can take this apart and redo it. I'm not real happy with it, but don't know what to change. I know I want to use this printed vellum, and I want the title wording to stay the same, except change Mom & Dad to their names. Anything other than that, I'm open to any and all suggestions! I just keep looking at this title page and thinking it's dull.