New Website

Apr 05, 2004 5 Replies
M

About a month ago, hubby and I purchased a domain to share, and I am finally getting my half of it going. I have the index page up now, and will be adding more pages as I get them done (hopefully one or two a day).



I would appreciate your thoughts on what I have done so far.



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Please take a look and let me know what you think. Right now, the Jewelry, Dolls and Bags links DO NOT work, as I don't have the pages up yet (will be adding them soon). The Ebay Auctions Link also doesn't work yet, as I have not added it yet.


--------------------------- Marissa Undercofler -- Marissa's Creations To see finished pieces:

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S

None of the links worked except for Sooz's list.

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L

On the grammar front: it's "a lot" not "alot".

On the marketing side, I would keep away from the "I just recently..." phrase. Even if your things are perfect and excellent and fabu the "I just" phrase can wreak havoc. A potential customer might think " Why would I pay you? You're a new beader, you don't know how to use your sewing machine, etc. How can I expect top quality, long life for the things I buy? How good can they be if she's just recently started?"

I don't know that I would disparage myself on my page. Be positive, be excited, be confident. Your page doesn't give me that "warm fuzzy".

Design wise: I'm not crazy about the beads. They kinda look like Easter eggs and I don't think that they represent the span of products that you are going to be selling.

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Dream Master

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If you want to make God laugh, tell him your future plans. Woody Allen

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A

I tried all the pages and got"page cannot be found" on all of them will try again tomorrow

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