New Website

None of the links worked except for Sooz's list.

On the grammar front: it's "a lot" not "alot".

On the marketing side, I would keep away from the "I just recently..." phrase. Even if your things are perfect and excellent and fabu the "I just" phrase can wreak havoc. A potential customer might think " Why would I pay you? You're a new beader, you don't know how to use your sewing machine, etc. How can I expect top quality, long life for the things I buy? How good can they be if she's just recently started?"

I don't know that I would disparage myself on my page. Be positive, be excited, be confident. Your page doesn't give me that "warm fuzzy".

Design wise: I'm not crazy about the beads. They kinda look like Easter eggs and I don't think that they represent the span of products that you are going to be selling.

Dream Master

If you want to make God laugh, tell him your future plans. Woody Allen

I tried all the pages and got"page cannot be found" on all of them will try again tomorrow