Critiques requested for first eBay layout

I'm working on the first layout for eBay auctions, and would appreciate any and all critiques.

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It's not linked with any other page, so you have to click on the link to access it.

Thanks in advance for all comments.

-Su

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Su/Cutworks
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Lovely bracelet, first off.. and the site is easy to read. I love how you give credit to the lampworker and direct readers to find more of her work. It means they can go look and be assured that this lampwork is all you promise it is. Well done. diana

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Diana Curtis

Thanks! I really like the way it turned out.

I want to be sure that people can see the quality of the beads and know they're getting real lampwork from artists who specialize in lampwork.

Thanks for your comments, they are very much appreciated.

-Su

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Su/Cutworks

The only thing I'd suggest is a little more white space between paragraphs - with everything centered like that, it's a little difficult to read.

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Barbara Forbes-Lyons

I know what you mean. For some reason FPExpress doesn't do things as easily as FP. When I list things using the layout they come out nicely spaced but a webpage gets all crowded.

I'll do some tinkering and try to space the cells a bit more. I may reduce the fonts slightly as they may be a bit larger than needed too.

Thanks for the comments.

-Su

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Su/Cutworks

The layout is great! The picture seems somewhat grainy to me. The bracelet is lovely! You included everything I could think of in the description, so that's great, too. :)

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Kandice Seeber

I really like it. I love the black-and-white simplicity, and I really, really like the fact that the bold text in the auction coordinates with the beads. I don't know why, usually I don't think that would appeal to me but I think it's because of the plain, almost-starkness of the auction template, which also has the benefit of really making the bracelet stand out.

-Kalera

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Kalera Stratton

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